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new electro track [message #479363] Tue, 19 February 2013 15:26 Go to next message
renalpha is currently offline  renalpha
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What do you guys think?
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Re: new electro track [message #479365 is a reply to message #479363] Tue, 19 February 2013 16:50 Go to previous message
EvilWhiteDragon is currently offline  EvilWhiteDragon
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A couple of things:
1) your intro is both short and long. Usually intro's are at least 45 seconds before the track really start. Your intro is pretty static for about 40 seconds. A little more build-up would be nice.
2) You try to mix in some bits that seems to be off, like the your house and my house. It's an iconic line, but you're not finishing it.
3) Where do you want to go with this track? As it seems that you try to mix styles a bit during the track. Personally, I think this is not a success in this case.


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