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okay i have practised [message #465937] Wed, 11 April 2012 12:18 Go to next message
renalpha is currently offline  renalpha
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http://soundcloud.com/sound-officials/sound-officials-glorious-life

here please listen to it and rate it.


Aircraftkiller wrote on Fri, 18 February 2011 23:50

I figured some people will still go LOLOLOL STARVING CATS LOOOOLZ UR A FAG or some dumb shit like that. Thanks for not disappointing! Smile

Re: okay i have practised [message #465938 is a reply to message #465937] Wed, 11 April 2012 13:04 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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it started out like a piece of cheesy shit but got more interesting close to a minute in
i'd re-build the intro and make it shorter so you can get to the cool part without getting irritated
make the ending not just DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, END.

i think overall you're getting better lol


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Re: okay i have practised [message #465942 is a reply to message #465938] Wed, 11 April 2012 13:48 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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not this again
Re: okay i have practised [message #465944 is a reply to message #465937] Wed, 11 April 2012 14:24 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Would at least change the first 30 seconds.

And this isn't house.


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Re: okay i have practised [message #465960 is a reply to message #465937] Wed, 11 April 2012 19:34 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Sounds much better than what I remember you posting like last year. Your use of timing has gotten much better.

It sounds consistant but you're no deadmau5 yet, But deffo have improved a lot. Try and use better sounds and stuff.. and more bass wouldn't hurt, the part after the intro and before the end-ish, if I heard that in a club I think I'd dance to it.

keep practising, edm 'n music making program isn't easy to learn, but you've progressed, keep it up man!


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Re: okay i have practised [message #465966 is a reply to message #465937] Wed, 11 April 2012 20:35 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I feel this track needs some female vocals. I agree that the beginning and ending need to be changed.

Re: okay i have practised [message #465967 is a reply to message #465937] Wed, 11 April 2012 22:00 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Re: okay i have practised [message #465974 is a reply to message #465937] Thu, 12 April 2012 04:03 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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you could make a renegade-friendly version
insert renegade sound clips into it Surprised

Iran could do something like that

Havoc, don't you wanna get in that tank? *bass drop*


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Re: okay i have practised [message #465979 is a reply to message #465974] Thu, 12 April 2012 04:26 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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liquidv2 wrote on Thu, 12 April 2012 12:03

you could make a renegade-friendly version
insert renegade sound clips into it Surprised

Iran could do something like that

Havoc, don't you wanna get in that tank? *bass drop*



haha i like this idea gogogo


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Re: okay i have practised [message #466259 is a reply to message #465937] Tue, 17 April 2012 01:05 Go to previous message
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You are getting better. I was able to listen to this all the way through feeling like it is actually a "track". I do agree that the beginning and ends need changed drastically. Keep it up and you'll keep improving.

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