Re: okay i have practised [message #465938 is a reply to message #465937] |
Wed, 11 April 2012 13:04 |
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liquidv2
Messages: 3407 Registered: February 2007
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it started out like a piece of cheesy shit but got more interesting close to a minute in
i'd re-build the intro and make it shorter so you can get to the cool part without getting irritated
make the ending not just DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, DURP, END.
i think overall you're getting better lol
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