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Re: C&C_Mangalia [message #456792 is a reply to message #456647]

Tue, 04 October 2011 09:45

GEORGE ZIMMER
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Registered: March 2006

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Alright, since I'm ~~bored~~ a nice guy, here's what's wrong with it:

1: Those ramps. Those fucking ramps. You literally just plopped them down without so much as attempting to use the environment to blend them into the design. Make it look more natural- like something you'd at least somewhat see in real life as a way to get up into elevated terrain.

2: The building in the middle. What the fuck is that? It's just a box lazily plopped into the middle. There is absolutely no reason to have it there. None. If I played this map, I would avoid it. Why is it there? Why should I care that it's there?

3: The map utterly lacks design. There are no "hot points", no interesting features, not even a decent theme (badly designed island with cartoony water..?).

Is the focus the island? Uh, okay, what elements of this island theme are being used? The water? The small size? Oh, wait, the map is huge. Sure, that's being fixed, but still. It just shows you had no intention of using any elements from your chosen theme.

4: It's WAY too wide open. This is almost always going to be a terrible idea for map design.

5: The current "features" suck. The blending is patchy at best, and the hills are far too jagged an unsightly.

I know you're not a native English speaker, but please- try to work on this map. And touch up on your map making skills a lot. You don't have to release a map- no one is forcing you to. And if you crap out a bad map, no one will want to play any of your other maps. Take some time, look at your map, and figure out what's wrong with it. Then, don't bother fixing it- just try anew. This map is unfix-able because even the concept is awful.

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		C&C_Mangalia By: sla.ro(master) on Mon, 03 October 2011 00:29
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: Jerad2142 on Mon, 03 October 2011 16:08
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: Mauler on Mon, 03 October 2011 16:30
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: Omar007 on Tue, 04 October 2011 00:20
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: sla.ro(master) on Tue, 04 October 2011 01:31
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: Sean on Tue, 04 October 2011 01:33
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: sla.ro(master) on Tue, 04 October 2011 01:42
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: Reaver11 on Tue, 04 October 2011 02:03
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: crazfulla on Tue, 04 October 2011 02:12
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: sla.ro(master) on Tue, 04 October 2011 02:22
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: Jerad2142 on Tue, 04 October 2011 14:17
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: sla.ro(master) on Wed, 05 October 2011 02:34
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: Jerad2142 on Fri, 07 October 2011 14:05
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: Spyder on Tue, 04 October 2011 07:04
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: GEORGE ZIMMER on Tue, 04 October 2011 09:45
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: sla.ro(master) on Tue, 04 October 2011 09:51
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: Reaver11 on Tue, 04 October 2011 10:51
		Re: C&C_Mangalia By: sla.ro(master) on Tue, 04 October 2011 12:33

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