| Re: did it i improve? [message #448564 is a reply to message #448541] |
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cmatt42
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Registered: July 2004
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I don't think I critiqued your stuff before, but these are my thoughts:
Summer: It feels like you keep building up for something to happen, but it never comes. It's like I'm on a rollercoaster in complete darkness and I keep going up... but I realize that I'm not going to go back down.
The Story: I liked the way it started, the smooth ambiance. I think the kicks just interrupt it a little too "hard". I would have liked to have heard more of the ambient noise from the beginning throughout the track
I don't think your stuff is "bad" per se, but it's rather simple and a little predictable. What I would like is hearing some sampling of other songs or adding vocals so that you're not relying too heavily on loops.
Who are your influences, by the way? Who do you think you sound most like?
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