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Re: Constructive Criticism [message #164939 is a reply to message #164937]

Sun, 31 July 2005 16:26

msgtpain
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Registered: March 2003
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MrBob, are you supposed to be using APA or MLA format? Most of it reads well, I found a few sentences which didn't flow well or where I would have added a comma, etc.; but not too many. Go through and remove all the contractions, it is instead of it's, they are instead of they're.. not supposed to use them in formal writing. If you post a .doc, I'm sure we could proof it for you.

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		Constructive Criticism By: MrBob on Sun, 31 July 2005 15:27
		Re: Constructive Criticism By: bandie63 on Sun, 31 July 2005 15:37
		Re: Constructive Criticism By: msgtpain on Sun, 31 July 2005 16:26
		Re: Constructive Criticism By: MrBob on Sun, 31 July 2005 17:02
		Re: Constructive Criticism By: warranto on Sun, 31 July 2005 18:51
		Re: Constructive Criticism By: SuperFlyingEngi on Mon, 01 August 2005 11:13
		Re: Constructive Criticism By: Jecht on Mon, 01 August 2005 14:48
		Re: Constructive Criticism By: MrBob on Mon, 01 August 2005 19:41

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