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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87166]

Thu, 13 May 2004 11:06

Walrus
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Commander

Something to be finished, or just a one off?

One Last Time

"England expects that every man will do his duty"

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87167]

Thu, 13 May 2004 11:09

KIRBY098
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Each day, something new. I have been wanting to contribute something back to dedicated fans for awhile now. I have a talent for writing, so here it is.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87173]

Thu, 13 May 2004 11:28

Walrus
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Good... Its going fine so far. it seems to be a situational at the moment, they always start fine, but have a habit of running out of steam after the first few paragraphs. Good luck, I want to know what happens in that barn... I just wish I had the balls to post up some of my own work. Now that would be funny..

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"England expects that every man will do his duty"

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87179]

Thu, 13 May 2004 11:59

rm5248
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What happend to the m00trix? Confused

w00t?

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87181]

Thu, 13 May 2004 12:00

KIRBY098
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I have always wanted to go a little deeper into the Nod world.

What would posses someone to be a Nod trooper?
How did they come to rise to power?
Where did the Hierarchy develop, and what would someone of that time period have seen?

I have been here just about every day since the game came out. I have staying power, and 45 minute lunch breaks in an office. Don't worry about that.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87183]

Thu, 13 May 2004 12:03

KIRBY098
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What happend to the m00trix? Confused

M00trix was silly. This will be a rather serious novella, based on the cutscenes from Tiberian Sun, Firestorm, and the original C&C.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87206]

Thu, 13 May 2004 12:55

K9Trooper
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Colonel

Nice way to start the story there Kirb. Loof foward to reading more.

R.I.P. TreyD. You will be missed, but not forgotten.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87227]

Thu, 13 May 2004 14:10

U927
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Colonel

/me points to the Den's War Story section.

You can post there to gain more fans. Smile

We are what we repeatedly do. Excellence then, is not an act but a habit. - Aristotle

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87229]

Thu, 13 May 2004 14:14

nastym4n
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KIRBY098

I have a talent for writing, so here it is.

hehe.

http://www.generalsmaps.net/8p_generals.php

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87251]

Thu, 13 May 2004 14:53

Cpo64
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Then when its done someone can make it into a screen play useing scripts and animations in renegade ^_^

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87288]

Thu, 13 May 2004 17:00

SuperFlyingEngi
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Oh no...actual quality writing in a chat forum?!?!?

Anyway, good luck, or whatever you say to someone who's writing something.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87461]

Fri, 14 May 2004 09:32

K9Trooper
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Colonel

Verry nice.

Maybe you should add on to the "FUD Report" on n00stories in Prevails absence.

R.I.P. TreyD. You will be missed, but not forgotten.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87462]

Fri, 14 May 2004 09:34

KIRBY098
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It has been tempting, but it is not my work.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87467]

Fri, 14 May 2004 10:09

ericlaw02
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Good Work!

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87486]

Fri, 14 May 2004 11:45

cheesesoda
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Kirby, wow. That's all I can say. I am literally watching your story. I don't see the words. I, of course, read them, but it's as if I'm staring through the words and watching the story. It's kind of scary to think that words could paint such a picture.

I am not one to want to read, at all. There are few things that I actually like to read and your story has gotten me sucked into it.

whoa.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87489]

Fri, 14 May 2004 11:48

KIRBY098
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I am happy you enjoy it. Lots more to come in this soldier's story.

Stay tuned.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87500]

Fri, 14 May 2004 12:09

Crimson
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Ditto. Excellent story-telling. I can't wait to read more. Smile

I'm the bawss.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87526]

Fri, 14 May 2004 13:42

Walrus
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Its going well, not like the stuff I write - that’s a good thing - I hope that this get an ending. I’m fed up if reading web stories that run out of steam less then a third in.
...keep up the good work!...

One Last Time

"England expects that every man will do his duty"

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87601]

Fri, 14 May 2004 18:31

spreegem
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Nice job Kirby. This has to be the best story I have ever read. I could literally visuallise what was happening in the story as I read it. Keep up the good work, I am really looking forward to reading the rest of this. Kirby, have you ever thought of writing books for a carrer or in spare time for some extra money? If you haven't you should. This story is great! Very Happy