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Layout [message #76275] Mon, 05 April 2004 19:07 Go to next message
z310
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I am supposed to make a wepage for my freind and i started on the layout earlier today and this is what i got to wut do you think? Critisism Please!!


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Layout [message #76289] Mon, 05 April 2004 19:41 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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The text is very hard to read...I love the style of it, but I had to take a few minutes to decifer that the text was Unforgiven. It was mainly how the "n"s were made. I'd say make those "n"s a bit more natural, but still keep the style.

Also, depending on the text you put into your left nav, it might be too small. Try it with the text to make sure everything fits.

The border is very clean and defined. However, the text and the doll are not. IMHO, the layout lacks unity. Try the border in the same kind of style as the text and doll. It might look better. If that doesn't work, try to find some other way to unify the layout. As of not, either the clean border is out of place, or the gungy, inky look of the text and doll are out of place.

Keep improving it; it will pay off with the final project Smile
Layout [message #76291] Mon, 05 April 2004 19:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Well I had no trouble reading the text. And I just love the look of it. How did you make that? Is it just a font?

Anyway there isn't a lot to criticise...But the only thing I would definately change are the white lines. Rough those up a bit.


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Layout [message #76294] Mon, 05 April 2004 19:51 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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i dunno...i would just change so you can see the "n"s better. I personally like the white lines. I can't really explain it, but it gives it some definition. i think otherwise it would be too hard to see the boundary of the banner and nav and frame. i don't know tho, do as they said and change the lines and then see which one turns out better.

whoa.
Layout [message #76298] Mon, 05 April 2004 19:58 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Like the little guy/animal/zombie in the background. Smile

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Layout [message #76316] Mon, 05 April 2004 20:58 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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It looks like a tormented childs toy.

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Layout [message #76343] Tue, 06 April 2004 01:25 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Too much space, bring it together more.

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Layout [message #76347] Tue, 06 April 2004 01:52 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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A:) Looks WAY too much like that apacoliptic media site
B:) Yes the text is cool in a way, if you like staring at something for 10 min to see what the hell it says CHANGE THAT DEFINTLY
C:) IF you dont change the text do what they said to unify it use a rough line instead of plain white
D:) Try to fill in the black spots more with sometthing, it its a design site an affiliates block accross the bottom would be good for buttons and such.

Other than fixing those good work, love ethat litte doll thingy.


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Layout [message #76355] Tue, 06 April 2004 03:18 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Trend-whore is obsolete.

I suck cock and love it... absolutely love it. And I just got banned for being too immature to be allowed to post here.
Layout [message #76359] Tue, 06 April 2004 03:49 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Aprime

Trend-whore is obsolete.


Screw off aprime, give constructive critisium or shut the fuck up.


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Layout [message #76368] Tue, 06 April 2004 04:50 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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What's "critisium"?

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Layout [message #76371] Tue, 06 April 2004 05:15 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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It does kinda look like my site, but it's changing it's design soon anyways.

whoa.
Layout [message #76410] Tue, 06 April 2004 12:10 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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A:) Looks WAY too much like that apacoliptic media site
B:) Yes the text is cool in a way, if you like staring at something for 10 min to see what the hell it says CHANGE THAT DEFINTLY
C:) IF you dont change the text do what they said to unify it use a rough line instead of plain white
D:) Try to fill in the black spots more with sometthing, it its a design site an affiliates block accross the bottom would be good for buttons and such.

Other than fixing those good work, love ethat litte doll thingy.


I dont need afilates its my freinds webpage, either way how does it look like apocalyptic media? The title my freind wants it that way, i asked him and he said leave it.
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L6P

The border is very clean and defined. However, the text and the doll are not. IMHO, the layout lacks unity. Try the border in the same kind of style as the text and doll. It might look better. If that doesn't work, try to find some other way to unify the layout. As of not, either the clean border is out of place, or the gungy, inky look of the text and doll are out of place.


The reason its not unified is because i made it to describe my freinds personality.

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Cwazyape

Like the little guy/animal/zombie in the background.


Thnx

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Cow


Aprime

Trend-whore is obsolete.

Screw off aprime, give constructive critisium or shut the fuck up.


Z

Critisism Please!!


I never said constuctive

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Aprime

Trend-whore is obsolete.


I dont understand what that means please explain (Excuse my low IQ)

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Thanx for the opinions.
Layout [message #76414] Tue, 06 April 2004 12:32 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Aprime

What's "critisium"?


If you cant read that simply of an spelling error, you need to be off the streets could hurt your self.


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Layout [message #76452] Tue, 06 April 2004 15:54 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Please don't make it look like that Apolitic Media crap, that website sucks with a capital s.

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SS217

Please don't mkae it look like that Apolitic Media crap


C'mon, no need for flaming me.

SS217

this website sucks with a capital s.


Yet, you didn't capitalize your "s".


whoa.

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Layout [message #76456] Tue, 06 April 2004 16:11 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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cowmisfit

Aprime

What's "critisium"?


If you cant read that simply of an spelling error, you need to be off the streets could hurt your self.


You take everything too seriously, n00b.

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I dont understand what that means please explain (Excuse my low IQ)


Trend-whore/trendwhore is a design style that is over one year old, it is, indeed obsolete for experienced designers, but good to begin with for newbies.


I suck cock and love it... absolutely love it. And I just got banned for being too immature to be allowed to post here.
Layout [message #76466] Tue, 06 April 2004 17:03 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Oh ok, good thing the webpage isnt mine :twisted:
Layout [message #76467] Tue, 06 April 2004 17:08 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Yet I didn't need to, since I stated capital before it.

http://gloryfades.black-cell.net/sig.jpg
Layout [message #76470] Tue, 06 April 2004 17:18 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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There's no point in saying, "with a capital s," when you don't capitalize it.

whoa.
Layout [message #76480] Tue, 06 April 2004 17:38 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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cowmisfit

Aprime

What's "critisium"?


If you cant read that simply of an spelling error, you need to be off the streets could hurt your self.


You take everything too seriously, n00b.

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I dont understand what that means please explain (Excuse my low IQ)


Trend-whore/trendwhore is a design style that is over one year old, it is, indeed obsolete for experienced designers, but good to begin with for newbies.



LOL, I take everything seriously eh? No i dont see, IM A N00B EVERYONE EVERYONE LOOK IM A N00b OMFG OMFG IM A N00B THATS FUNNY AS HELL!!!!! :rolleyes: im so sick of that word.


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Layout [message #76669] Wed, 07 April 2004 12:32 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Aprime


Trend-whore/trendwhore is a design style that is over one year old, it is, indeed obsolete for experienced designers, but good to begin with for newbies.


Yes i know im a newb, but what makes my layout of that style, the lines?
Layout [message #76707] Wed, 07 April 2004 15:59 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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So much anger in just one thread!

Theres like 2 flame wars in here!


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Layout [message #76709] Wed, 07 April 2004 16:18 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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z310

Aprime


Trend-whore/trendwhore is a design style that is over one year old, it is, indeed obsolete for experienced designers, but good to begin with for newbies.


Yes i know im a newb, but what makes my layout of that style, the lines?


The way it's shaped, mostly.


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Layout [message #76722] Wed, 07 April 2004 17:14 Go to previous messageGo to previous message
z310
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Ok and thnx.
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