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Mon, 06 October 2003 09:20

Walrus
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Registered: February 2003
Location: Good old England

Karma:

Commander

- When he finally pulled him self together he walked over and stud by Alice�s side, he couldn�t get the taste of bile out of his mouth, or the aching in his stomach from having nearly spilled his guts, that oven ready pizza was fine were it was.
- It was a sorry sight indeed, sobering not because something bad had happened but because that was another person lying there, it was the woman who takes your order at the restaurant, or your own sister. It didn�t matter who it was, the symbolism was the same. The feeling does pass though. Know that it washes over you and leaves you cold, so that at the time you can at least do something even is it�s just standing in the middle of the street watching it all happen. Of course it comes back, it always does, and no fancy headshrinker will be able to help. Late at night these people come in to your room and remind you of that moment that changed your whole out look on this wonderful fun filled plain of existence called life. And then what happens? You sit there in your bed, wide awake, because sooner or latter you have to go to the same place they went to, and you don�t know if your method of getting there is a car traveling 60mph late one night.
And she lay there bleeding.
-Alice had been the first one there and had regretted it. Her white blouse was stained and streaked dark brown. Alice wasn�t even talking now, when she saw him standing there her eyes were wide and shocked, did she even see him at all? Or had he become part of the landscape? The truth was, Alice wanted to be anywhere but here. She wished that she had never come out. No one, least of all her wanted to see the warm and fuzzy layers of reality stripped away. No one wanted to know that people could die like this. No one wanted to hold the hand of dieing stranger.
-All he could do was stand there and bare whiteness to this woman�s last moments on earth�

One Last Time

"England expects that every man will do his duty"

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		OT: Add to this story By: z310 on Sun, 05 October 2003 17:31
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		OT: Add to this story By: Walrus on Mon, 06 October 2003 02:48
		OT: Add to this story By: Walrus on Mon, 06 October 2003 04:09
		OT: Add to this story By: DarkDemin on Mon, 06 October 2003 06:07
		OT: Add to this story By: z310 on Mon, 06 October 2003 06:52
		OT: Add to this story By: Walrus on Mon, 06 October 2003 09:20
		OT: Add to this story By: Walrus on Tue, 07 October 2003 02:15
		OT: Add to this story By: Walrus on Tue, 07 October 2003 02:33
		OT: Add to this story By: spreegem on Tue, 07 October 2003 11:51
		OT: Add to this story By: Walrus on Tue, 07 October 2003 17:43
		OT: Add to this story By: spreegem on Tue, 07 October 2003 18:04
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