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Re: C&C_Dockside [message #472747 is a reply to message #472745]

Fri, 03 August 2012 14:29

Aircraftkiller
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Registered: February 2003

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General (5 Stars)

The metal floor plating is far too large compared to the character model. Your fences are too short, and the texture is being smashed vertically. You have texture stretching on the rear of the tank cars, and the texture being used on them doesn't really look like the kind of surface a tank car would have.

Here's an example:

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/2/2d/TILX290344.JPG

The cross beams on the bridge could use some texture detailing, perhaps some kind of bar with bolts on it. Something to make it look visually interesting. Right now it's very bland and it's obvious that you used a generic metal texture set to box mapping.

You should add fences next to the area where the trains are, and scale them appropriately to the size of the character.

The railroad texture doesn't really jive with the textures it's sitting next to. You can tell it's photo-sourced whereas the road texture looks like one of the bland Renegade textures.

The huge caution stripe going horizontally across the bridge makes no sense.

Other than that, it looks like a good start. Put some more work into it and I imagine it will look more interesting.

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		C&C_Dockside By: Reaver11 on Fri, 03 August 2012 13:05
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: Aircraftkiller on Fri, 03 August 2012 14:29
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: Reaver11 on Fri, 03 August 2012 15:30
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: Aircraftkiller on Fri, 03 August 2012 15:51
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: Reaver11 on Fri, 03 August 2012 16:04
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: renalpha on Tue, 07 August 2012 03:23
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: liquidv2 on Wed, 08 August 2012 01:01
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: Reaver11 on Wed, 08 August 2012 10:34
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: roszek on Wed, 08 August 2012 06:24
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: roszek on Wed, 08 August 2012 17:01
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: TEAM MDK on Thu, 09 August 2012 06:40
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: raven on Fri, 10 August 2012 03:39
		Re: C&C_Dockside By: Major-Payne on Fri, 10 August 2012 08:04

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