| Re: did it i improve? [message #448784 is a reply to message #448541] |
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cmatt42
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When Life is too Short: I think you have too many different things going on in this one that don't go well together. The strings make it sound like a suspenseful film scene and I don't think they fit with the finger snaps. The piano is okay with the finger snaps, but the strings are a little too extreme for both of them.
When the Sun Goes Down: I actually kind of like this one. I think it's too long though. I also think you need some sort of "resting" phase in here somewhere... it gets a little tiring hearing the same stuff without some different bits to keep it interesting.
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