| not giving up [message #435338] |
Mon, 23 August 2010 11:55  |
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renalpha
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http://sound-officials.nl/play-populair.php?play=17
yes, another release. 8 hours waste of time, or im getting somewhere.
| Aircraftkiller wrote on Fri, 18 February 2011 23:50 |
I figured some people will still go LOLOLOL STARVING CATS LOOOOLZ UR A FAG or some dumb shit like that. Thanks for not disappointing! 
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| Re: not giving up [message #435339 is a reply to message #435338] |
Mon, 23 August 2010 12:19  |
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| renalpha wrote on Mon, 23 August 2010 11:55 |
8 hours waste of time
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| DarkDemin wrote on Thu, 03 August 2006 19:19 |
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| Re: not giving up [message #435341 is a reply to message #435338] |
Mon, 23 August 2010 12:47 |
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I think it's ok, not too bad. I do not like the parts where it seems to "skip", like a record with a scratch. It is better than the last one in my opinion.
I still prefer that very first one you posted.
I am no expert though, and could not do any better at all.
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| Re: not giving up [message #435353 is a reply to message #435343] |
Mon, 23 August 2010 15:37 |
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| renalpha wrote on Mon, 23 August 2010 13:14 |
| Dover wrote on Mon, 23 August 2010 21:19 |
| renalpha wrote on Mon, 23 August 2010 11:55 |
8 hours waste of time
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thx reborn will work on it.
Dover, tell me what needs to be done better. i need tips.
i want to improve however dont forget i do this since thursday.
Normally i use my mixer and mix up tracks like mad.
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For starters, if your goal is to make music, I suggest you learn an instrument and study music theory, rather than knocking shit together on a program you torrented and hoping for the best.
From there, I suggest trying to make your music with less shittiness.
| DarkDemin wrote on Thu, 03 August 2006 19:19 |
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| Re: not giving up [message #435412 is a reply to message #435338] |
Tue, 24 August 2010 11:05 |
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There needs to be some sort of transition at 0:35.. it just suddenly turns into something completely different
There's not enough of a change between the beginning and after the second drop
Other than that, not bad imo. I like the beat and where it could go
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| Re: not giving up [message #435531 is a reply to message #435460] |
Thu, 26 August 2010 03:59 |
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| CarrierII wrote on Wed, 25 August 2010 13:08 |
then force me to moderate.
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No laziness please!
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| Re: not giving up [message #435579 is a reply to message #435460] |
Thu, 26 August 2010 15:53 |
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| CarrierII wrote on Wed, 25 August 2010 05:08 |
I'd rather renalpha handled Dover's trolling (frankly that's what it is, you could just not say a thing, Dover) like that, then force me to moderate.
Back to the topic...
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It'd be trolling if I was wrong. >:[
| DarkDemin wrote on Thu, 03 August 2006 19:19 |
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| Re: not giving up [message #435582 is a reply to message #435579] |
Thu, 26 August 2010 17:28 |
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| Dover wrote on Thu, 26 August 2010 23:53 |
| CarrierII wrote on Wed, 25 August 2010 05:08 |
I'd rather renalpha handled Dover's trolling (frankly that's what it is, you could just not say a thing, Dover) like that, then force me to moderate.
Back to the topic...
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It'd be trolling if I was wrong. >:[
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Careful what you wish for. his OP was quite frankly better than the other stuff he's made.
He has the timing down. It's got faster bpm's and he's beefed up his sound. Still lacks bass and a better drum beat. Needs more catchy hooks.
Practice a bit more. And use a better sound pack for your beats and synths and piano notes and shit. FL Studios is completely bollocks though especially when your using the presets, I suggest using something better but first, learn how to crawl (musically).
Presence is a curious thing, if you think you need to prove it... you probably never had it in the first place.
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| Re: not giving up [message #435585 is a reply to message #435582] |
Thu, 26 August 2010 18:31 |
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| Ryu wrote on Thu, 26 August 2010 17:28 |
| Dover wrote on Thu, 26 August 2010 23:53 |
| CarrierII wrote on Wed, 25 August 2010 05:08 |
I'd rather renalpha handled Dover's trolling (frankly that's what it is, you could just not say a thing, Dover) like that, then force me to moderate.
Back to the topic...
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It'd be trolling if I was wrong. >:[
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Careful what you wish for. his OP was quite frankly better than the other stuff he's made.
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That's one hell of a curve you're grading on.
| DarkDemin wrote on Thu, 03 August 2006 19:19 |
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| Re: not giving up [message #435646 is a reply to message #435585] |
Fri, 27 August 2010 09:16 |
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| Dover wrote on Fri, 27 August 2010 02:31 |
| Ryu wrote on Thu, 26 August 2010 17:28 |
| Dover wrote on Thu, 26 August 2010 23:53 |
| CarrierII wrote on Wed, 25 August 2010 05:08 |
I'd rather renalpha handled Dover's trolling (frankly that's what it is, you could just not say a thing, Dover) like that, then force me to moderate.
Back to the topic...
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It'd be trolling if I was wrong. >:[
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Careful what you wish for. his OP was quite frankly better than the other stuff he's made.
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That's one hell of a curve you're grading on.
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You've got your sexes muddled up, I curve slightly to the left. 
Presence is a curious thing, if you think you need to prove it... you probably never had it in the first place.
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