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| Re: new totel convertion [message #193943 is a reply to message #193900] |
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Jaspah
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Excuse me why I laugh over that HORRIBLE storyline. For God's sake, have the damn brains to atleast write a proper storyline... you know with good spelling and grammar. Second, your storyline sounds like something a 3rd grader would write. One day, blah blah blah then blah blah blah is crap. Please, LEARN HOW TO FUCKING SPELL BEFORE YOU START A MODIFICATION PROJECT.
Please die.
Thanks,
Jaspah
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| Re: new totel convertion [message #193948 is a reply to message #193943] |
Sun, 26 March 2006 18:50 |
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| Jaspah wrote on Sun, 26 March 2006 20:08 |
Excuse me why I laugh over that HORRIBLE storyline. For God's sake, have the damn brains to atleast write a proper storyline... you know with good spelling and grammar. Second, your storyline sounds like something a 3rd grader would write. One day, blah blah blah then blah blah blah is crap. Please, LEARN HOW TO FUCKING SPELL BEFORE YOU START A MODIFICATION PROJECT.
Please die.
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Jaspah
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I would take maturity over english spelling and grammar anyday.
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| Re: new totel convertion [message #193952 is a reply to message #193900] |
Sun, 26 March 2006 20:03 |
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the rest of the world in crumbles
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Lol, my favorite line.
| HORQWER wrote on Tue, 18 September 2007 20:47 |
this is not a real renegade forums ,some one made it up
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| Re: new totel convertion [message #193976 is a reply to message #193957] |
Mon, 27 March 2006 01:33 |
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| blkhnd112 wrote on Sun, 26 March 2006 23:34 |
| Jaspah wrote on Sun, 26 March 2006 20:08 |
Excuse me why I laugh over that HORRIBLE storyline. For God's sake, have the damn brains to atleast write a proper storyline... you know with good spelling and grammar. Second, your storyline sounds like something a 3rd grader would write. One day, blah blah blah then blah blah blah is crap. Please, LEARN HOW TO FUCKING SPELL BEFORE YOU START A MODIFICATION PROJECT.
Please die.
Thanks,
Jaspah
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Instead of yelling at him and telling him to die you could atleast help him out.
Anyways if you need Any help at all just let me know and I can fix your storyline a bit pm me.
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I agree with you completly. If something is wrong, you should fix it instead of just screaming and yelling at him its wrong, even though i do that sometimes 
"I wumbo, you wumbo, he, she, wombo, wombo, wombo-ing, wobology, the study of wombo, it's first grade SpongeBob" - Patrick Star.
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| Re: new totel convertion [message #193977 is a reply to message #193943] |
Mon, 27 March 2006 02:26 |
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| Jaspah wrote on Sun, 26 March 2006 20:08 |
Excuse me why I laugh over that HORRIBLE storyline. For God's sake, have the damn brains to atleast write a proper storyline... you know with good spelling and grammar. Second, your storyline sounds like something a 3rd grader would write. One day, blah blah blah then blah blah blah is crap. Please, LEARN HOW TO FUCKING SPELL BEFORE YOU START A MODIFICATION PROJECT.
Please die.
Thanks,
Jaspah
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Dude...
What's wrong with you? Go help him or something if you think you can do better.
And this is a forum, not some letter writing shit so no need for the
And by the way Jaspah, 6 more posts lands you in the 1337 category.
nopol10=Nopol=nopol(GSA)
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| Re: new totel convertion [message #193993 is a reply to message #193900] |
Mon, 27 March 2006 08:24 |
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I like the looks of it, however, I think you should update the description a bit:
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Its is the year 2210 north Korea And china are very technology advance and one day they attack the rest of the world with there lacer cannon ,but some one attacks them to but its doesn't evectthem much. With the rest of the world in crumbles the attack was successful and under rule of Alex chi-ching and his top assassin Drake but a small group of underground freedom fighters form under the name GFJ (Global FREEDOM And Justices) GFJ is is controlled by a council .
who are the council knowone knows who all the peopel in it.
only person who people know is in it is an elite soldier named Ashly and they know that the council is made up of elite soldiers
and is a group of four.
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First of all you need a little more background.Imagine you are writing a lesson for a history book.
First, write Causes of the entire conflict, somewhat a Chronology of what happened.I don't mean that you have to write years!Tie what happened within a story.Resistance and Collaboration - explain the GFJ part a bit more.How did it form, what does it do, what technology does it employ?Aftermath - What happened with the entire world after the attack, not just "but some one attacks them to but its doesn't evectthem much".
AND The most important part (!!!) where does your tc tie into the entire story.What part of the story does it involve?The Causes, the Resistance or the Aftermath?Be creative and a bit more specific 
Don't take this as an insult, or as being disrespectful toward you. I'm just trying to help with as much as i can
Keep us all updated and don't mind comments, such as Jaspah's.
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| Re: new totel convertion [message #194001 is a reply to message #193900] |
Mon, 27 March 2006 10:04 |
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Grammer, eh? Well woulda been nicer if you had helped correct then, maybe.
It is the year 2210, North Korea and China are very technologically advanced. One day they decide to attack the rest of the world with their laser cannon. An anynomous group then attack Korea and China, but fortunatly for them, the assault does little damage. Much of the world is now destroyed and the rest is under the rule of Alex Chi-Ching. A small group of freedom fighters lead by a four man council emerges to challenge Chi-Ching's power.
And i guess you could fit the Ashly thing in how you wanted. I think that looks better though.
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| Re: new totel convertion [message #194003 is a reply to message #193900] |
Mon, 27 March 2006 10:32 |
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yup, that makes pretty much sense
Review your storyline, based on dude#1's corrections and my suggestions and you'll have something appealing to the players
Good luck, and most of all, have fun!
Almost forgot: This mod is included in my modwatch, dont forget to keep us updated here as well 
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| Re: new totel convertion [message #194025 is a reply to message #193943] |
Mon, 27 March 2006 13:11 |
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| Jaspah wrote on Sun, 26 March 2006 19:08 |
Excuse me why I laugh over that HORRIBLE storyline. For God's sake, have the damn brains to atleast write a proper storyline... you know with good spelling and grammar. Second, your storyline sounds like something a 3rd grader would write. One day, blah blah blah then blah blah blah is crap. Please, LEARN HOW TO FUCKING SPELL BEFORE YOU START A MODIFICATION PROJECT.
Please die.
Thanks,
Jaspah
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That may have been bit rude but that part about please die I thought was funny as hell.
oh and if you need help with cars or buildings I'd gladly send you some of my work.
Some of my renegade stuff.
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| Re: new total conversion [message #194052 is a reply to message #194025] |
Mon, 27 March 2006 15:58 |
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i know what i want the cars to look like
building i have some what idea
two new pic at moddb all pic there so far are from rebel side that is what there templates are going to look like except the background
o and does anyone no that background interface thing is called
the council will be reveled with in the three of the beta versions released
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| Re: new totel convertion [message #194054 is a reply to message #193900] |
Mon, 27 March 2006 16:08 |
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oh i see you want them big walking at-at type things ....well I dont know if i can help you there...
what do you want the buildings to look like? what kind of theme? like desert, future, civillian, big buildings? If you give me some Ideas I could throw some stuff together for you to look at or to change or you can use them.
Some of my renegade stuff.
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