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| C&C Reborn: Umagon [message #141053] |
Mon, 28 February 2005 06:53   |
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In the second image the neck doesn't look like it's connected to the body, they either need to be given correct smoothing groups to match the body, or connected to the body with correct smoothing groups.
The vest and the arm pad/straps need to be extruded and made to actually look like they're on her, instead of part of her skin. Also, the arm pad takes up too much space on the arm, and in the drawing it looks like it's supposed to be some gun holster.
It looks alright, it just needs more work.
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| C&C Reborn: Umagon [message #141071] |
Mon, 28 February 2005 09:05 |
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Mick
Messages: 78
Registered: September 2004
Location: Dublin, Ireland
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| Aircraftkiller |
That looks sooo fake...
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You rant on about wanting constructive criticism for your teams work, you even went and shut down the APB modification updates thread for a while because a lot of people pissed you off for doing exactly what you're doing right now, once again why not practice what you preach even though this isn't the APB forum, no reason why you can't be civil for once.
Overall the model looks good, however I think there should more detail added to the face and hair, other than that, looking good.
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| C&C Reborn: Umagon [message #141075] |
Mon, 28 February 2005 09:20 |
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SuperFlyingEngi
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Registered: November 2003
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Good, but not great.
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| C&C Reborn: Umagon [message #141099] |
Mon, 28 February 2005 11:50 |
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WNxCABAL
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Registered: July 2004
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Yea, also, her ass doesn't look as cute as it does in the render.
I mean, come on, if you are going to be in 3rd person mode, you got to have a reason to buy that model 
And also, the arm band things, in the render it appears that it is like made of 3 segment/parts. But in the Model, it only appears as one big thing.
In all fairness, the low half of the model (apart from the arse ) appears to be good stuff, I just think that the top half needs to be revised.
C Ya
Andy.
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| C&C Reborn: Umagon [message #141133] |
Mon, 28 February 2005 15:16 |
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There is also another thing that should be corrected:
All Renegade characters are T-posed, while this one has arms in inverse V-pose.
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| C&C Reborn: Umagon [message #141245] |
Tue, 01 March 2005 06:21 |
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What he ought to say is "Damn, I wish Renalert had a character modeler." But since he'd rather dirvert the attention towards the ever-so-cliche Reborn bashing, he'll just have to make due with random and unsupported dissent.
I think she looks pretty good, but her skin reeks of cheap tanning salon, and her neck is definitely not properly connected to her torso. Also, the lines on her face make her look old. Last but not least, is that wood on her boots? Lol. And her hair looks like lego hair, because of the way it's modeled. It's like a huge afro that defies the laws of gravity, eerily suspending itself away from her back and neck.
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LoL, thx and you are right.
I hope Ramza ( wich is a sort of extra-worker ) will accept to modify it. And I also hope he has time too. He is a very busy guy...
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| C&C Reborn: Umagon [message #141246] |
Tue, 01 March 2005 06:22 |
jd422032101
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Registered: April 2004
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I think it look like small boxes put togother with ms paint slaped on it
come look at it it sucks.
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