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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Something to be finished, or just a one off?
creator: Walrus
date: 2004-05-13T18:06:37-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Each day, something new. I have been wanting to contribute something back to dedicated fans for awhile now. I have a talent for writing, so here it is.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-13T18:09:31-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Good... Its going fine so far. it seems to be a situational at the moment, they always start fine, but have a habit of running out of steam after the first few paragraphs. Good luck, I want to know what happens in that barn... I just wish I had the balls to post up some of my own work. Now that would be funny..
creator: Walrus
date: 2004-05-13T18:28:52-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: What happend to the m00trix?
creator: rm5248
date: 2004-05-13T18:59:20-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: I have always wanted to go a little deeper into the Nod world. What would posses someone to be a Nod trooper? How did they come to rise to power? Where did the Hierarchy develop, and what would someone of that time period have seen? I have been here just about every day since the game came out. I have staying power, and 45 minute lunch breaks in an office. Don't worry about that.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-13T19:00:27-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: rm5248 What happend to the m00trix? M00trix was silly. This will be a rather serious novella, based on the cutscenes from Tiberian Sun, Firestorm, and the original C&C.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-13T19:03:10-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Nice way to start the story there Kirb. Loof foward to reading more.
creator: K9Trooper
date: 2004-05-13T19:55:22-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: /me points to the Den's War Story section. You can post there to gain more fans.
creator: U927
date: 2004-05-13T21:10:56-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: KIRBY098 I have a talent for writing, so here it is. hehe.
creator: nastym4n
date: 2004-05-13T21:14:15-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Then when its done someone can make it into a screen play useing scripts and animations in renegade ^_^
creator: Cpo64
date: 2004-05-13T21:53:55-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Oh no...actual quality writing in a chat forum?!?!? Anyway, good luck, or whatever you say to someone who's writing something.
creator: SuperFlyingEngi
date: 2004-05-14T00:00:54-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Verry nice. Maybe you should add on to the "FUD Report" on n00stories in Prevails absence.
creator: K9Trooper
date: 2004-05-14T16:32:36-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: It has been tempting, but it is not my work.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-14T16:34:44-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Good Work!
creator: ericlaw02
date: 2004-05-14T17:09:09-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Kirby, wow. That's all I can say. I am literally watching your story. I don't see the words. I, of course, read them, but it's as if I'm staring through the words and watching the story. It's kind of scary to think that words could paint such a picture. I am not one to want to read, at all. There are few things that I actually like to read and your story has gotten me sucked into it.
creator: cheesesoda
date: 2004-05-14T18:45:36-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: I am happy you enjoy it. Lots more to come in this soldier's story. Stay tuned.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-14T18:48:57-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Ditto. Excellent story-telling. I can't wait to read more.
creator: Crimson
date: 2004-05-14T19:09:28-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Its going well, not like the stuff I write - that’s a good thing - I hope that this get an ending. I’m fed up if reading web stories that run out of steam less then a third in. ...keep up the good work!...
creator: Walrus
date: 2004-05-14T20:42:16-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Nice job Kirby. This has to be the best story I have ever read. I could literally visuallise what was happening in the story as I read it. Keep up the good work, I am really looking forward to reading the rest of this. Kirby, have you ever thought of writing books for a carrer or in spare time for some extra money? If you haven't you should. This story is great!
creator: spreegem
date: 2004-05-15T01:31:55-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
creator: K9Trooper
date: 2004-05-18T14:23:42-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: We need a video to go along with the story.
creator: rm5248
date: 2004-05-18T19:00:36-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: For a second there I thought this was going to be cut short... We need more!
creator: Walrus
date: 2004-05-18T19:12:23-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Someone give this thing a "Sticky" please
creator: K9Trooper
date: 2004-05-18T19:16:39-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Sorry folks. I took a family day on Monday. More to come.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-18T19:34:58-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Great story Kirby! Not bad for a squid, not bad at all.
creator: Krazyfoxx
date: 2004-05-19T01:35:02-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: if I could figure out how this movie could be made I would do it.
creator: DarkDemin
date: 2004-05-19T02:10:46-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Yeah a "Re-education camp"! Kane's voice: "We are your friends" ACK's voice: "Remember it is Nod not NOD" Sorry about that, I had to
creator: K9Trooper
date: 2004-05-19T18:39:29-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: "Sorry about that, I had to" ruin a good post. :rolleyes:
creator: Mad Ivan
date: 2004-05-19T18:54:41-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: * stomps out potential flame war *
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-19T18:59:50-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: No flame war here... Just some humor.
creator: K9Trooper
date: 2004-05-19T19:07:09-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: aye
creator: Mad Ivan
date: 2004-05-19T19:59:50-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Good work (again)!
creator: ericlaw02
date: 2004-05-20T07:51:29-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: I'm confused... When this story first started I thought it was set during the C&C time period, but now you're mentioning titans and I'm really confused...
creator: Try_lee
date: 2004-05-20T15:19:49-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Try_lee I'm confused... When this story first started I thought it was set during the C&C time period, but now you're mentioning titans and I'm really confused... And you have a right to be. I decided to follow the Tiberian Sun timeline, as it really is the pivotal time for Nod. The original C&C was limited in it's storyline. The reclamation of the temple site in Sarejevo was the real momentum forward, and Nod's gambit for World domination really started there. This storyline follows Slavik's return to power after his attempted execution, and Kane's return to the Brotherhood after the temple was destroyed by Ion cannon. Basically, the hieght of power for the Brotherhood is about to come to fruition.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-20T15:36:36-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Kirby, just letting you know you have more fans out there! ^_^
creator: Bombario
date: 2004-05-21T10:03:44-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Hehe, the lesson for getting in a tiberium field!
creator: ericlaw02
date: 2004-05-21T18:07:47-00:00

Not a Good Area to Hide by!
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description: KIRBY098 He ran down the tower stairs, and towards a Tiberium silo. He must be really desperate, hiding there. He's probably forgotten the dream he had a couple of hours ago! I love the story by the way!
creator: Umbrella Corp. T-Virus
date: 2004-05-21T21:29:06-00:00

Re: Not a Good Area to Hide by!
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description: Umbrella Corp. T-Virus I love the story by the way! I second that, its really good
creator: Dethdeath
date: 2004-05-21T22:52:39-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: After you finish writing all this you should make this into a real book and sell it if EA will let you. I'd buy it for sure.
creator: spreegem
date: 2004-05-22T03:09:54-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Let's go sailor! The weekend's over and I need my fix!
creator: Krazyfoxx
date: 2004-05-24T16:24:30-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Sorry, sorry. Meetings all day. For once I was actually doing some work... :rolleyes:
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-24T19:41:34-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: incredible. No more!!!
creator: Mad Ivan
date: 2004-05-24T21:44:32-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: wow!cant wait for the next one.Are you thinking the story out as you post or have you wirtten it on a peace of paper and/or word?
creator: Mad Ivan
date: 2004-05-25T15:02:24-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: KIRBY, do you mind if I save the posts so I can add them together and print them off for later re-reads?
creator: Phoenix - Aeon
date: 2004-05-26T10:33:45-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Nope, go right ahead. As long as no one copies it, and / or claims it as thier own, I don't care too much.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-26T12:06:47-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Mad Ivan wow!cant wait for the next one.Are you thinking the story out as you post or have you wirtten it on a peace of paper and/or word? I keep a framework in my head of where I want this to end up, and I also keep in mind that I need to stay true to the storyline Westwood made up. I type it onto word on my breaks, and post it here. For the most part though, made up on the spot.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-05-26T12:17:19-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: you are amazing.Send a mail to EA or something, you can make money and you can also releaze a great novel...the first of any Westwood Games, iirc
creator: Mad Ivan
date: 2004-05-26T16:57:20-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: amazing!
creator: Mad Ivan
date: 2004-05-26T20:07:45-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: cant wait for the next one!
creator: Mad Ivan
date: 2004-05-28T18:59:57-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Nooo! Don't stop now, this is such a bad spot to stop at. I want to know what's behind the door on the right.
creator: spreegem
date: 2004-05-28T21:43:48-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: ^im with him
creator: Mad Ivan
date: 2004-05-29T07:51:26-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Hey Kirby. Could you maybe put an estimated date at the end of a section of the story so we could have an idea of when the next part will come out???
creator: PyroX
date: 2004-05-31T16:18:32-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: DON'T STOP NOW!!! Actualy you should write Sci-fi books. Man it would be a real page-turner! I can't wait! You put us through agony in waiting...
creator: PyroX
date: 2004-06-01T17:25:17-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: MAN THIS IS AWSOME!!! KEEP IT COMMIN!
creator: PyroX
date: 2004-06-02T22:47:15-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Novel?
creator: Boxcarman
date: 2004-06-03T04:54:04-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Boxcarman Novel? No way! MOVIE
creator: Dethdeath
date: 2004-06-03T10:50:49-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: KIRBY098 nubile What?
creator: rm5248
date: 2004-06-03T19:19:23-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: rm5248 KIRBY098 nubile What? Supposed to be "mobile". I guess Recon bikes can be attractive too...
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-06-03T19:27:53-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Good work, I NEVER heard of these good CNC stories before!
creator: ericlaw02
date: 2004-06-04T09:32:45-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: This would have made a great single player Nod Campaign.
creator: Falconxl
date: 2004-06-04T10:18:43-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: I agree...
creator: ericlaw02
date: 2004-06-04T13:28:34-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Damn, keep it coming Kirby. This is great.
creator: xptek_disabled
date: 2004-06-04T15:53:54-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: KIRBY098 Civilian ID number 03456678-A1 nice ID number , remoinds me of my Halflife CD key...
creator: renegay3
date: 2004-06-06T08:40:43-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: MAN THIS IS GREAT!!!
creator: PyroX
date: 2004-06-07T17:08:11-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: This is great! I am always checking to see if there is a new one.
creator: PyroX
date: 2004-06-08T20:26:50-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: AWSOME...
creator: PyroX
date: 2004-06-11T16:29:15-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: go on!
creator: Mad Ivan
date: 2004-06-12T11:38:51-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: damn, this is awsome! i love the suspence heh. i'd like to know whats going on outside, and why were the vechs and lab abandoned, inside a military base? well its been a few dyas, waiting for an update
creator: drunkill
date: 2004-06-15T08:56:14-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: I will do more today. I don't write on the weekends, and yesterday was busy at the office.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-06-15T12:09:09-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Keep going, its so good
creator: cokemaster
date: 2004-06-15T13:44:40-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Quote: and hit the building labeled "Westwood Stock Exchange" on about the second floor. such a sad day when the Erroneously Aimed weapons system fails and causes the Westwood building to fall...
creator: warranto
date: 2004-06-18T01:33:09-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Slavik is back in black awsome, but i still wonder why the cars were all underground, ahh well, if you do some action things, i will forget about the cars good job, keep it up.
creator: drunkill
date: 2004-06-19T11:24:43-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: It sounded to me like it was an underground car park Nice to see your not running out of steam on this Kirby, I've had writers block before, I know how many stories can be lost to that. Good work.
creator: Phoenix - Aeon
date: 2004-06-19T11:28:12-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: sweet, more MORE!!
creator: Phil162
date: 2004-06-20T14:01:56-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: W00t it's nice!!!!
creator: M1Garand8
date: 2004-06-21T07:13:41-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Keep 'em coming! (Must...say that... ) Good job of that story, I bet your head will explode if you do like 5 parts of that one day...cause it's so exciting!
creator: ericlaw02
date: 2004-06-22T05:23:55-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Ahhhg its tuesday night and its wed in like 40 mins, hehe so we need more updates! well wed here anyway, still like 5am over in the us... sooo exiting, sooo cool, now dont tell us that you have meetings on mondays
creator: drunkill
date: 2004-06-22T12:54:28-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: drunkill Ahhhg its tuesday night and its wed in like 40 mins, hehe so we need more updates! well wed here anyway, still like 5am over in the us... sooo exiting, sooo cool, now dont tell us that you have meetings on mondays I have meetings every day. I just have to balance my time to get these out of my head. If I attend a meeting and have to focus on other things, the story wouldn't be of a very good quality. Qulaity over quantity always, young one.
creator: KIRBY098
date: 2004-06-22T13:13:35-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: goodjob
creator: jd422032101
date: 2004-06-22T14:18:59-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Argh, can't wait to see the next one! Hmm..but I have a feeling about that battle grid simulator will help...*bets that inside it will be Nod VS GDI too *
creator: ericlaw02
date: 2004-06-23T03:27:24-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: it get better and better
creator: jd422032101
date: 2004-06-23T04:10:04-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: T3h w00tage
creator: M1Garand8
date: 2004-06-23T07:12:02-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: This is my favorite Soap Opera. Good job Kirb.
creator: K9Trooper
date: 2004-06-23T14:35:37-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: it's great keep it coming
creator: jd422032101
date: 2004-06-23T15:09:13-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: W00t nice!
creator: M1Garand8
date: 2004-06-25T04:21:00-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Ah, people in the Command and Conquer universe also play Command and Conquer themselves
creator: PointlessAmbler
date: 2004-06-25T04:52:02-00:00

Scorpion's Tale
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description: This story is Über 1337!
creator: Umbrella Corp. T-Virus
date: 2004-06-25T06:44:34-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: This is going great. Please finish off this chapter today I don't think I can wait an entire weekend.
creator: K9Trooper
date: 2004-06-25T13:46:22-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: good good i like it
creator: jd422032101
date: 2004-06-25T15:49:33-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: More!
creator: M1Garand8
date: 2004-06-26T01:57:15-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Hmmmm chameleon spy training.... Nod Spy training officer "Repeat after me, HA HA HA HA"
creator: Phil162
date: 2004-06-30T09:49:06-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: w00t
creator: M1Garand8
date: 2004-07-01T14:15:28-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: I can't wait for the next writing you put out. Please give us a 4th of July present, PRETTY PLEASE! WITH SUGAR ON TOP!
creator: spreegem
date: 2004-07-04T17:17:37-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: yay good job
creator: jd422032101
date: 2004-07-06T16:55:03-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: "Early is on time, and on time is late." Always loved that rule, though getting there before the training staff never was a good thing.
creator: warranto
date: 2004-07-06T22:04:27-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: awsome, basic training, where he will get punished and tested and driven to near insanity, and then rewarded with a pass great story.
creator: drunkill
date: 2004-07-07T08:30:26-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: If I'm driven to near insanity, I'll probably shoot my CO or anyone who pissed me off too much....
creator: M1Garand8
date: 2004-07-07T11:32:28-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: M1Garand8 If I'm driven to near insanity, I'll probably shoot my CO or anyone who pissed me off too much.... i would to
creator: jd422032101
date: 2004-07-07T15:15:25-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: M1Garand8 If I'm driven to near insanity, I'll probably shoot my CO or anyone who pissed me off too much.... then kill yourself? do you watch to much fmj?
creator: Cpo64
date: 2004-07-07T23:04:09-00:00

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale
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description: Cpo64 M1Garand8 If I'm driven to near insanity, I'll probably shoot my CO or anyone who pissed me off too much.... then kill yourself? do you watch to much fmj? Nah, just too much pent up anger. =x
creator: M1Garand8
date: 2004-07-08T12:49:03-00:00