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Something to be finished, or just a one off?
Each day, something new. I have been wanting to contribute something back to dedicated fans for awhile now. I have a talent for writing, so here it is.
Good... Its going fine so far. it seems to be a situational at the moment, they always start fine, but have a habit of running out of steam after the first few paragraphs. Good luck, I want to know what happens in that barn... I just wish I had the balls to post up some of my own work. Now that would be funny..
What happend to the m00trix?
I have always wanted to go a little deeper into the Nod world. What would posses someone to be a Nod trooper? How did they come to rise to power? Where did the Hierarchy develop, and what would someone of that time period have seen? I have been here just about every day since the game came out. I have staying power, and 45 minute lunch breaks in an office. Don't worry about that.
rm5248 What happend to the m00trix? M00trix was silly. This will be a rather serious novella, based on the cutscenes from Tiberian Sun, Firestorm, and the original C&C.
Nice way to start the story there Kirb. Loof foward to reading more.
/me points to the Den's War Story section. You can post there to gain more fans.
KIRBY098 I have a talent for writing, so here it is. hehe.
Then when its done someone can make it into a screen play useing scripts and animations in renegade ^_^
Oh no...actual quality writing in a chat forum?!?!? Anyway, good luck, or whatever you say to someone who's writing something.
Verry nice. Maybe you should add on to the "FUD Report" on n00stories in Prevails absence.
It has been tempting, but it is not my work.
Kirby, wow. That's all I can say. I am literally watching your story. I don't see the words. I, of course, read them, but it's as if I'm staring through the words and watching the story. It's kind of scary to think that words could paint such a picture. I am not one to want to read, at all. There are few things that I actually like to read and your story has gotten me sucked into it.
I am happy you enjoy it. Lots more to come in this soldier's story. Stay tuned.
Ditto. Excellent story-telling. I can't wait to read more.
Its going well, not like the stuff I write - that’s a good thing - I hope that this get an ending. I’m fed up if reading web stories that run out of steam less then a third in. ...keep up the good work!...
Nice job Kirby. This has to be the best story I have ever read. I could literally visuallise what was happening in the story as I read it. Keep up the good work, I am really looking forward to reading the rest of this. Kirby, have you ever thought of writing books for a carrer or in spare time for some extra money? If you haven't you should. This story is great!
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
We need a video to go along with the story.
For a second there I thought this was going to be cut short... We need more!
Someone give this thing a "Sticky" please
Sorry folks. I took a family day on Monday. More to come.
Great story Kirby! Not bad for a squid, not bad at all.
if I could figure out how this movie could be made I would do it.
Yeah a "Re-education camp"! Kane's voice: "We are your friends" ACK's voice: "Remember it is Nod not NOD" Sorry about that, I had to
"Sorry about that, I had to" ruin a good post. :rolleyes:
No flame war here... Just some humor.
aye
I'm confused... When this story first started I thought it was set during the C&C time period, but now you're mentioning titans and I'm really confused...
Try_lee I'm confused... When this story first started I thought it was set during the C&C time period, but now you're mentioning titans and I'm really confused... And you have a right to be. I decided to follow the Tiberian Sun timeline, as it really is the pivotal time for Nod. The original C&C was limited in it's storyline. The reclamation of the temple site in Sarejevo was the real momentum forward, and Nod's gambit for World domination really started there. This storyline follows Slavik's return to power after his attempted execution, and Kane's return to the Brotherhood after the temple was destroyed by Ion cannon. Basically, the hieght of power for the Brotherhood is about to come to fruition.
Kirby, just letting you know you have more fans out there! ^_^
Hehe, the lesson for getting in a tiberium field!
KIRBY098 He ran down the tower stairs, and towards a Tiberium silo. He must be really desperate, hiding there. He's probably forgotten the dream he had a couple of hours ago! I love the story by the way!
Umbrella Corp. T-Virus I love the story by the way! I second that, its really good
After you finish writing all this you should make this into a real book and sell it if EA will let you. I'd buy it for sure.
Let's go sailor! The weekend's over and I need my fix!
Sorry, sorry. Meetings all day. For once I was actually doing some work... :rolleyes:
incredible. No more!!!
wow!cant wait for the next one.Are you thinking the story out as you post or have you wirtten it on a peace of paper and/or word?
KIRBY, do you mind if I save the posts so I can add them together and print them off for later re-reads?
Nope, go right ahead. As long as no one copies it, and / or claims it as thier own, I don't care too much.
Mad Ivan wow!cant wait for the next one.Are you thinking the story out as you post or have you wirtten it on a peace of paper and/or word? I keep a framework in my head of where I want this to end up, and I also keep in mind that I need to stay true to the storyline Westwood made up. I type it onto word on my breaks, and post it here. For the most part though, made up on the spot.
you are amazing.Send a mail to EA or something, you can make money and you can also releaze a great novel...the first of any Westwood Games, iirc
Nooo! Don't stop now, this is such a bad spot to stop at. I want to know what's behind the door on the right.
^im with him
Hey Kirby. Could you maybe put an estimated date at the end of a section of the story so we could have an idea of when the next part will come out???
DON'T STOP NOW!!! Actualy you should write Sci-fi books. Man it would be a real page-turner! I can't wait! You put us through agony in waiting...
MAN THIS IS AWSOME!!! KEEP IT COMMIN!
Boxcarman Novel? No way! MOVIE
KIRBY098 nubile What?
rm5248 KIRBY098 nubile What? Supposed to be "mobile". I guess Recon bikes can be attractive too...
Good work, I NEVER heard of these good CNC stories before!
This would have made a great single player Nod Campaign.
Damn, keep it coming Kirby. This is great.
KIRBY098 Civilian ID number 03456678-A1 nice ID number , remoinds me of my Halflife CD key...
MAN THIS IS GREAT!!!
This is great! I am always checking to see if there is a new one.
damn, this is awsome! i love the suspence heh. i'd like to know whats going on outside, and why were the vechs and lab abandoned, inside a military base? well its been a few dyas, waiting for an update
I will do more today. I don't write on the weekends, and yesterday was busy at the office.
Keep going, its so good
Quote: and hit the building labeled "Westwood Stock Exchange" on about the second floor. such a sad day when the Erroneously Aimed weapons system fails and causes the Westwood building to fall...
Slavik is back in black awsome, but i still wonder why the cars were all underground, ahh well, if you do some action things, i will forget about the cars good job, keep it up.
It sounded to me like it was an underground car park Nice to see your not running out of steam on this Kirby, I've had writers block before, I know how many stories can be lost to that. Good work.
Keep 'em coming! (Must...say that... ) Good job of that story, I bet your head will explode if you do like 5 parts of that one day...cause it's so exciting!
Ahhhg its tuesday night and its wed in like 40 mins, hehe so we need more updates! well wed here anyway, still like 5am over in the us... sooo exiting, sooo cool, now dont tell us that you have meetings on mondays
drunkill Ahhhg its tuesday night and its wed in like 40 mins, hehe so we need more updates! well wed here anyway, still like 5am over in the us... sooo exiting, sooo cool, now dont tell us that you have meetings on mondays I have meetings every day. I just have to balance my time to get these out of my head. If I attend a meeting and have to focus on other things, the story wouldn't be of a very good quality. Qulaity over quantity always, young one.
goodjob
Argh, can't wait to see the next one! Hmm..but I have a feeling about that battle grid simulator will help...*bets that inside it will be Nod VS GDI too *
it get better and better
T3h w00tage
This is my favorite Soap Opera. Good job Kirb.
it's great keep it coming
W00t nice!
Ah, people in the Command and Conquer universe also play Command and Conquer themselves
This story is Über 1337!
This is going great. Please finish off this chapter today I don't think I can wait an entire weekend.
good good i like it
Hmmmm chameleon spy training.... Nod Spy training officer "Repeat after me, HA HA HA HA"
w00t
I can't wait for the next writing you put out. Please give us a 4th of July present, PRETTY PLEASE! WITH SUGAR ON TOP!
"Early is on time, and on time is late." Always loved that rule, though getting there before the training staff never was a good thing.
awsome, basic training, where he will get punished and tested and driven to near insanity, and then rewarded with a pass great story.
If I'm driven to near insanity, I'll probably shoot my CO or anyone who pissed me off too much....
M1Garand8 If I'm driven to near insanity, I'll probably shoot my CO or anyone who pissed me off too much.... i would to
M1Garand8 If I'm driven to near insanity, I'll probably shoot my CO or anyone who pissed me off too much.... then kill yourself? do you watch to much fmj?
Cpo64 M1Garand8 If I'm driven to near insanity, I'll probably shoot my CO or anyone who pissed me off too much.... then kill yourself? do you watch to much fmj? Nah, just too much pent up anger. =x